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Friday, April 12, 2019

My shark descripition

Hi.  We have been doing descriptive writing this term.

I did my writing about sharks.

A shark is a little fish that grows into a large predator in the sea.            
It looks like a shark has a black nose. It looks like a bit like an airplane with its fins for wings. It has tiny eyes. It has light blue grey skin on top of its body and white on the bottom of its body. it has a triangle fin on the top of its body.
Sharks can eat many fish around the waters.Sharks can eat many people.Sharks can sneak.
Sharks can jump and get people. Sharks can go under the water.

Shark have lots of sharp teeth and a long tail. Sharks have a big mouth. Sharks have soft nose.

I would feel scared because if I went in the boat and saw a shark I would feel scared

2 comments:

  1. Hello Jherean.I like the way you said that a shark looks like an aeroplane.You have used some good describing words to tell us about what a shark eats and how you told us it's a predator.Can you tell me what a predator is?

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  2. A predator is something that eats other animals and thank you for commenting
    on my awesome Blog

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