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Thursday, August 22, 2019

Music story Stater

In writing we have  been doing story  I chose the titanium because the boy was mad this is the story that I right .




A boy was in a dark classroom. The class room was messy because there
were pieces of paper, a juice box and lunch boxes scattered on the floor.
There was broken pieces of wood on the walls. 


A teacher called the police. She was in the classroom.
She closed the door when the boy went outside.


When he went outside a police came to get the boy.
The teacher was talking to the police. Outside it was a sunny day.
The boy was wearing a beanie.


The boy got on his bicycle and rode to his house. He went inside the door.
He saw the tv and want to his  room to get has bag. 


The police came. The police chased him.
The boy was in the forest
. The forest was dark. 

The police caught the boy and asked the boy to sit down.
The boy curled into a ball and put his  hands over his head.
The boy blew the police away with the light.




3 comments:

  1. Hello Jherean. You did a great job describing what had happened. You used interesting words. It would be a bit scary if something like this happened when everyone got mad wouldn't it?

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    1. Hi Mr Martyn
      thank you for commenting on my blog I no this story is scary but thanks for the comment.

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  2. Hello Jherean, you did a good description and your story and what happened in your story. Plus you also added what was in your story. I once wrote about descriptions from a picture also.

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