My art shape

In room 9 we have been doing shapes I made my one here it is hope you like my art shape bye.

Music story Starter 2

In room 9 we watched a musical video.I chose to write about Paradise because an elephant was in the jail.I hope you enjoy my story.

An elephant was  in a zoo jail. He was writing each day he was stuck in the  jail,on the wall.He was
shaking the bars.

 He found a piece of wood and he escaped.The police chased him.He saw a bike and rode to the city.

He went to the train station.The train station was noisey.The elephant missed his family. 

He wrote Paradise on a piece of cardboard. He needed money to see his family.He was dancing to
get some money.

 He got on the plane. The plane was flying and a girl dropped a snack on the floor.He got off  the plane.

He danced in the street.He is feeling happy. A child  put money in his bucket.

He takes his money into the bike shop to buy a bike.He wanted the green bike.The man said you
can't buy this bike you can only buy a unicycle.

He was riding his unicycle to find his family.He saw a giraffe and some trees.He saw his family
and his family were using instruments.They started to dance.They were happy.

how to a comment on some bodys blog

In cybersmat we have been doing Animaker and we have to comment on somebodys blog 

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