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Wednesday, August 26, 2020

Show don't tell


Hello readers, today I will present my writing. we learned about the show did not say. we photographed scary things. Here is my writing and my picture



In the Philippines, my dad, mum, big sister, big brother, little sister and my uncle said we were going to a cold warm ocean. My heart flutters in anticipation. It was my third time to go swimming in the Philippines and it is always a memorable experience every time . It was an awesome day there for a swim.  I put my swimsuit  on. So it was fun there my aunt said if I swim underwater she would be happy. It was so deep that  I couldn't breathe anymore thinking there would be sharks or other sea mammals in the water. It was not cool thinking about that. I got back in to change my clothes. My big brother, big sister and my uncle were just taking pictures of my big sister and my big brother. My grandfather came and took photos after we ate yummy food we ate and went home!  It was another memorable holiday that I had with my family and relatives.




7 comments:

  1. Well done Jherean.Your words gave me a picture in my head and they made me feel like I was in the Philippines with you.
    I'm glad that the animals didn't get you 😊.
    Thank you for sharing your learning with us.

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  2. Thank you have a Great day! BYE!

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  3. hello jherean you did great on that jherean because you look like you are swimming under the water you did great on that i like your photo.

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  4. Hi Jherean, it was a memorable holiday vacation with our family in the Philippines on that time and thank you for sharing it in your blog😊.

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  5. Hi Jherean, that Unknown comment on the top it was me your mum��

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    1. Hi mum thank you for commenting in my blog have a good day mum BYE!

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  6. Hi Jherean. I liked the way you took a picture of yourself underwater. You made me remember how I went to the Philippines and went to the beach. See you again.

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