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Wednesday, August 12, 2020

my writing

Hey readers so I just fished my writing it took a lot of time to add stuff and what it looks like and what it see like hope you like it have agood day and be safe! BYE!! 

my writing : There was a chubby freckled boy named Justin who was playing Call of Duty. His Mum came in the front door carrying a huge brown box. His tired-looking mum placed the brown box on the table in front of him. 

Justin was so engrossed in his exciting  game that he didn’t bother to open it.  His  mum  opened the curtain and Justin's eyes blinked and the phone rang and rang.  So his mum answered the phone and went upstairsJustin paused the game. He was confused as he looked at the brown box.  He opened the mysterious box and he only opened the left side of the cardboard.  He opened the brown box and something popped  out - a cute little yellowish dog.  The puppy’s nose and its golden ears were so cute. He was so delighted to see the little wagging puppy with its bright excited eyes that seemed inviting to play.

 Justin was happy but later found out that the dog has only three legs and he  was extremely disappointed.  He threw the little dog on the white carpet as he left the box on the floor. He said,`she  has gotta be kidding me.” 

But the dog wanted to play with him. He kicked the cute little dog bout of disappointment  and he  said “GET LOST!!Justin was so mad then he unpaused the game and kept playing

. The yellow-leashed dog was upside down. Then the dog saw the little red ball in the bottom of the tv table.

That dog turned back he ran because it wanted the red little ball it pushed itself in the table in the tv after the dog went in the bottom of the table of the tv.

 It got the red ball and ran to Justin to keep playing and he saw the red little and the dog.

Justin kicked the small red ball in the brown box the dog ran and went to the brown box

And the dog went inside the box he trapped himself out Justin looked in the dog he ignored it and Justin kept playing. 

The dog is moving in the box around the living room. Justin  looked at him. 

The cute dog wanted to play with Justin and Justin was playing the game. The dog got the small little red ball and Justin in front of Justin with his cute little black paws. Justin grabbed the red little ball and the cute little dog was looking at him and Justin stood up and had a stick and put the red little he  in his pocket and walked and Justin  opened the door .The cute little dog ran after Justin 

 the cute dog have so happy to play with Justin :)) they are so happy ever and ever :)))) THE END 

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