opening sentence for my story

Hey readers W.A.L.T write an interesting first sentence to hook our reader. My first sentence was "

There was a chubby freckled boy named Justin who was playing Call of Duty. His Mum came in the front door carrying  a huge brown box. His  tired looking mum placed the brown box on the table in front of him. 

Justin was so engrossed in his exciting  game that he didn’t bother to open it.  His  mum and Justin's eyes blinked and the phone rang and rang.  So the mum answered the phone and went upstairs.  Justin paused the game and opened the mysterious box and he only opened the left cardboard.  He opened the brown  box and something popped  out - a cute little yellowish dog i am still working on my work so hope you like it bye!! have a good day :))))