Hi guys its been a while sense I posted a blog post. So Today's blog is going to be about slide Show I made a slide show about animals. So guys I have a question? tell me what you have learn in this side show.The first side is a example And the next side is mine one ans all of the side in the bottom.I hope you have a great bay BYE!!:)
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Sunday, April 26, 2020
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Good morning Jherean.I can tell you have put a lot of work into your slide.I liked that your A-Z was on animals as I LOVE learning facts about them.Did you know the macaw,is the same bird that Elgregoe has,it's just a different colour.
ReplyDeleteI had trouble reading and understanding some of the words you used to describe/write about the picture.Remember to put the words into you own words so you know what the word is.I hope you know what I mean,if not,please ask me.
Keep up the great blogging as I always enjoy looking at your work.
Nice work Jherean. I can see you have put in a lot of time researching all of your animals. A follow up to what Mrs Cassidy suggested is that you need to ask yourself if you know the meaning of all the words you are writing. I find it really helpful to use the dictionary webpage that I showed you. I like to look up the word I'm not sure of and use the meaning to help me rewrite my sentence so that I understand it and hopefully your reader will too. Sometimes it is hard to change some words especially scientific ones like the names of the animal groups. I wonder why lions have a furry tuft at the end of their tail? Do you think it is there for a reason? Thank you for sharing your facts. You included some animals/birds that I hadn't heard of before like the xenops. What is your favourite animal or bird?
ReplyDeleteHello Jherean.I was just checking your blog to see if you have completed any new work.I will keep looking at your blog to see if you have added any new work.
ReplyDeleteTake care and have a great week.All the best.
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ReplyDeleteHello Jherean.I was just checking your blog to see if you had added any work that you might have completed.
ReplyDeleteHave a good week and I will check your blog again soon.
Hello Jherean.
ReplyDeleteI was just checking to see if you had put any more learning onto your blog.I will check again soon.
Have a great day.
Hello Jherean.
ReplyDeleteI was just checking to see if there was any new learning added recently.I know the teacher's have set up some great tasks and that they will take you a while to complete.I will check again soon.Thanks for posting the learning you have posted so far.