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Monday, May 25, 2020

returning to school

Hello guys so today's i am going to share my first draft feel happy to be back to school. our teacher made a side show and we have to do it. And we have to do a story about returning to school and we have to put it in our blog It was fun to do it. So i have to show you guys So here it is





So thanks for looking What can I improve my writing? BYE!!!!

1 comment:

  1. Hello Jherean.
    I like the text you have used.It is different to all the other work I have looked at.
    What have you enjoyed most about being back at school?.I like talking to the kids and hearing about all the fun they have had over the holidays.

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