Hey Readers welcome back to my awesome blog! so today's blog is going to be about my writing. This writing was in 2017 when its my first time going to New Zealand so guys here it is! hope you have a awesome day😎😜😛😁😂 have a good day BYE!
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On a Sunday 2017 in the Philippines me and my mum,aunt, big and little sister,big brother were so happy to go to New Zealand. So we went to the air plane to relax. I have just been sleeping and my mum is eating food and my big brother was looking at the iPad in the air plane. After we arrived in Australia we went eating because everyone was so hungry and after we went to the airport and went in the air plane the air plane was so big and it was awesome. We were almost in New Zealand but Faye, my little sister was so sad because she missed my dad's Grandma. We arrived in New Zealand!
We saw our dad and picked up the luggage and we went in the parking lot and I saw the car that my dad was driving. After we went home I saw some toys! And I saw a lego car. My dad went back to work and I was just sleeping again because it was a long day and my mum was just sleeping with me. And my dad went back home and we went to Warehouse and bot something and after we went to McDonald and eat yummy and I got a happy meal food I have so happy and after my dad gave me a green jacket and went home.my dads friend came over in our house and my dad gave me and my brother toys I got some awesome toys so after we went to sleep and I sleep with my dad and mum and my toy in the ground and my aunt,big sister,big brother,my little sister was sleeping in the bed and we went to sleep…… THE END!
Jherean the show don't tell story look's amazing you did great on that well done jherean i like it.
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