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Wednesday, October 14, 2020

My Flower drawing

Hello Readers welcome back to my blog! so today's blog is going to be about how to improve my drawing. So in room 11 I we have been drawing flowers and we have to post it in our blog and I"m kinda good at drawing  kinda awesome i think so  i"m going to show you it! here it is  how could i  improve my drawing? hope you have a good day! BYE! 






 

3 comments:

  1. Hi Jherean. You have made an awesome job of the leaves on your drawing. You seem to have a lot more petals that are quite a lot smaller than the ones on the original. Do you think you could try again with the petals only in a single layer like the original and try to get the size more like that too? I think you need to add more detail to the centre too. Awesome first draft!

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  2. Hi Keri i will try to do it hope you have a good day! BYE!

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  3. Hello Jherean.
    I really like the detail that you have put into the petals.As soon as I saw your picture I could tell it was a sunflower.Maybe you could add some detail to the head of the flower to show the seeds that the flower will drop once it gets older.

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