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Today I made a Tree house writing.In room 9 we have been learning about Descriptive writing, A descriptive writing is you have to tell how you feel hear and taste are teacher told us to pick a picture to do my writing so I picked the tree house. here is my writing I hope you like it.
I was exploring through the creepy old forest to take pictures of it for my research when an injured fox came up to my tidy green shirt. She came up to my right shoulder. I felt like she was in danger. I heard creaking leaves, I heard noises of rustling leaves of mysterious creatures in the forest, water splashing down the rocks. The wind was blowing and the leaves were dancing down. I went to a bush and I was wandering so sneakily. There were 3 other foxes looking for her. I went up to put the fox in the ground with them then they caressed each other then they went back through the bush and it started to rain. I could taste cold water droplets. I saw something that gave me chills. I saw a broken looking treehouse, there was no one in the treehouse. I was far from my house. I saw green vines in the tree house. There were lots of forest trees, and I saw a black zip line. I went inside and it smelled like bird poop. I went to the kitchen and I smelled old rotten food. The bees were swarming around the rotten food. I felt like someone was here before, there were paints everywhere on the table. I went to the bedroom and there were pictures painted on the wall. The pictures looked like they were painting a sign. The sign said “beware.” I sprinted back outside the tree house. I went to the river and chilled there. It was getting dark and the sun was closing in. I couldn't see anything . I could hear wolves howling. I felt like they were going hunting for food. I ran as fast as I could to the treehouse. It was raining more and there were thunder flashes. I was getting really cold. I didn’t bring any jackets. I went to sleep on the cold, hard, wood floor. The next morning there were cold hard winds coming after me. I knew I had to go back to my car so I ran as fast as I could. The winds kept coming after me so I stopped and someone tried to hit me with a rock. They broke my red and black glasses. I had a little break then I ran again. I saw my car there, I ran to my car and drove off.
I hope you like it.
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