Hey Readers,
Welcome back to my blog.
Today I will be showing you about a story called The Lost Trident. This term we have been learning to write a narrative stories. The purpose of narrative is to entertain the readers. First we had to write a planner about things we are going to need are the settings,characters we also need the begging, middle, resolution and end. We had to include describing words. My favorite sentence is "Lee called his 2 weird friends in his imaginary I phone 14." One thing I can prove on is to add more describing words.
I hope you enjoy it.
Please leave a comment and have a good day Bye!.
There was so much happening in this story Jherean.Well done on making the reader read until the end.
ReplyDeleteI would like to visit the Artic because I would like to see the animals in their natural habitat.
Have a great week.
Hello Mrs Cassidy. Thank you for commenting in my blog. Have a nice day Bye!
DeleteHi Jherean, I haven't read your story yet but i will. There is a lot going on in your story. You have done a good job writing in a whole sentence. I hope you come to school and have some fun. Have a fun day with your family.
ReplyDeleteHi Yavnit,Thank you for commenting in my blog. I hope you enjoy reading my story. Have a great day. Bye!
DeleteKia Ora Jherean,
ReplyDeleteI really like your story Jherean I think it is very amazing and very descriptive to read.Was your story based on minecraft? I really liked your work have a great day!