Persuasive Writing 2

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I hope you guys have a great day today. Today I will be showing you my persuasive writing 2. Last week in room 9 we have been learning about persuasive writing. A piece of persuasive writing is where you believe in what you like and you have to convince other peoples ideas. Our task was to make a another set of statements with 3 different reasons.

We also had to add why we think that. We also had look for evidence to prove our point. When we were done we had to post it in our blog. I hope you really like it. Here it is.

I think… Animals should be allowed to be kept in the zoo.

Because… Some animals are wild animals and they can be really tall or big and they could break buildings and statues. Some of them have venomous poison they could kill other animals by using their claws or their teeth. Zoos can help the animals with what they need to live and survive. Students can learn what they do in the wild. Zoo keepers can help the animal’s health.

My evidence: In Zoos, animals can get a hospitable environment. In most of the Zoos, there are vet doctors appointed to take care of animals' health. In Zoos, there are also trained people who are specially hired to feed different animals, as responsibilities of different cages are allocated to them. Similar to the natural habitat, the animal can also get the same ambiance in Zoos. Moreover, people visiting Zoos can get to know about the different species and also children learn about their origin and habits.

In conclusion, I would say that to save wildlife, the best place for animals are Zoos. Animals are more protected and cared for in Zoos than anywhere else. ( Source Link)

I think… Everyone should brush their teeth twice a day

Because… If you don't brush your teeth they will smell very bad and disgusting. If you brush your teeth it will remove those sticky things in your teeth called plaque.

My evidence:Our mouths are constantly filled with bacteria and germs that are growing and spreading. Brushing your teeth twice a day will ensure that this bad bacteria is destroyed or removed. If you brush your teeth in the morning and go the entire day without brushing again, the build-up of bacteria will start damaging the enamel of your tooth and weaken their gums and roots, allowing decaying to occur. The presence of this bad bacteria also contributes to foul breath.

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I think… Swimming lessons should be compulsory for every child

Because… One day they might be stuck on an island and they have to swim back but they don't know how to swim. And it's good for everyone to learn how to swim. They could save someone’s life when they are swimming if they were drowning.

My evidence:The basic need for inducing swimming into the curriculum is because swimming is a basic skill set that can prove to be beneficial for the children in their life ahead. Drowning is one of the most common causes of death all across the world and teaching children to swim at a very young age can act as a solution to this problem. (Source Link)