Hey Readers and bloggers,
This week hen was been learning about recount. A recount is a story and you have to use "I" because you are part of the story and we use past tense in a recount. Our teacher showed us a story about robbery animation so I have to be the one in the story here is my recount writing
It was a dark spooky night when there were two creepy men in the red car. One was wearing a light green jacket with large lips. The other one was wearing a cyan jacket with a brown mask. I saw them go out of the car holding a gun and a black looking bag.
They went inside the dairy looking suspiciously. I peeked in the window and the shopkeeper was scared so I called the police “Hello 111 how can I help you?” said the police “sir I need your help I saw two men holding a gun and a bag.
I think they are Robbers! “OK just wait in 30 minutes when I will come and help you” said the police. I was really scared. The taller man held his gun and pointed it at the shopkeeper. The smaller men put the bag on the counter. The taller men said “give us the Money Now!!!’ said the taller men. The small men wanted to fight the shopkeeper but he was smaller so what he did was jumped on him but he slipped and face planted on the floor he passed out.
The taller man was about to shoot him but the police came. The police arrested the two men “Thank you young boy you are a hero!”. Said the shopkeeper after that happened I went home and I told my mum the whole story.
Thank you for looking in my story have a good day! BYE!
