Hey reader,
How are you guys doing today?
Today is the day That I will be showing you Funny Bear part 2! It took along time to think some new Character I have very exacted to show you guys Part 2 Here is the Part 2 story
Thank you guys for looking in my story Part 3 is coming soon.
have a nice day BYE!
I went to Kung Fu Panda's den and he wasn’t there. I said “Kung Fu Panda, where are you!!” I shouted I went to his backyard. He was there practicing kung fu. I said “Hey panda, what are you doing?” He said Oh I'm just a new move it's called the flying bamboo kick” Wow that's cool I wish that I can get powers one day. “ Oh speaking of powers I'm starting to learn nature powers “ oh cool “Oh wait who’s that in the door “Oh these are my teams” Wait what? You never told me that you had teams! Yea said kung fu panda you can meet them. Ok thanks “ Hey said Bear of the sea hello welcome to my bamboo world! said kung fu panda. Ok?? You know this ain't bamboo world? Right?? Said tiger Ok right said kung fu panda ok guys let’s to the point oh can we eat first I'm hungry Ok fine …… part 3 coming soon!
Good afternoon Jherean.
ReplyDeleteI like that you are keeping the readers in suspense by having parts to your story.
I can see that you've used lots of punctuation too.We can see when someone is talking.
Just remember that when we do ask a question in a sentence,we also need to add a question mark.
Keep up the great story and I look forward to part 3.