Kumusta Readers,
This week in room 9 we have been learning about a recount. We use past tense and (I) because you are the one who is telling a story. I wrote my own story about a funny bear. Mrs Cassidy helped me with my story. Here is my story
Funny Bear Story by Jherean
It was a cold and rainy night.I was walking through the forest when I saw a gigantic, angry bear. He had very sharp claws that could break wood. He was wearing a pink dress with purple spots.I decided to run. The bear was chasing me when all of a sudden the bear tripped in the ground and face planted into a cream pavlova covered in strawberries and kiwifruit.I kept running until I saw a panda doing kung fu. He was eating bamboo to be stronger. I went to his shelter and saw him meditating. I went to talk to him. He said if I get him more bamboo he would fight the bear and trap him.
I climbed the ladder to get the bamboo while the panda went and trapped the bear. After the panda trapped the bear, he called animal control to get the bear to return to the forest.
I hope you guys like it. What part of the story did you like the most? Have a nice day!
Kumasta Jherean.
ReplyDeleteWell done for adding your own ideas into the story.I really like how the bear was returned to the wild.That's my favourite part.
You made the start of my story WAY more interesting.You did a fantastic job.You should e very proud of yourself.
Why do you think the bear decided to chase you?
Maybe that could be told for another story for free time writing.
Hi Mrs Cassidy, Thank you for commenting in my blog I might make a part 2 so yea Thank you!!
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