I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, September 20, 2019
Thursday, September 5, 2019
Music story Starter 2
In room 9 we watched a musical video.I chose to write about Paradise because an elephant was in the jail.I hope you enjoy my story.
An elephant was in a zoo jail. He was writing each day he was stuck in the jail,on the wall.He was
shaking the bars.
shaking the bars.
He found a piece of wood and he escaped.The police chased him.He saw a bike and rode to the city.
He went to the train station.The train station was noisey.The elephant missed his family.
He wrote Paradise on a piece of cardboard. He needed money to see his family.He was dancing to
get some money.
get some money.
He got on the plane. The plane was flying and a girl dropped a snack on the floor.He got off the plane.
He danced in the street.He is feeling happy. A child put money in his bucket.
He takes his money into the bike shop to buy a bike.He wanted the green bike.The man said you
can't buy this bike you can only buy a unicycle.
can't buy this bike you can only buy a unicycle.
He was riding his unicycle to find his family.He saw a giraffe and some trees.He saw his family
and his family were using instruments.They started to dance.They were happy.
and his family were using instruments.They started to dance.They were happy.
Wednesday, September 4, 2019
how to a comment on some bodys blog
In cybersmat we have been doing Animaker and we have to comment on somebodys blog
here is my project
Thursday, August 22, 2019
Music story Stater
In writing we have been doing story I chose the titanium because the boy was mad this is the story that I right .

A boy was in a dark classroom. The class room was messy because there
were pieces of paper, a juice box and lunch boxes scattered on the floor.
There was broken pieces of wood on the walls.
were pieces of paper, a juice box and lunch boxes scattered on the floor.
There was broken pieces of wood on the walls.
A teacher called the police. She was in the classroom.
She closed the door when the boy went outside.
She closed the door when the boy went outside.
When he went outside a police came to get the boy.
The teacher was talking to the police. Outside it was a sunny day.
The boy was wearing a beanie.
The teacher was talking to the police. Outside it was a sunny day.
The boy was wearing a beanie.
The boy got on his bicycle and rode to his house. He went inside the door.
He saw the tv and want to his room to get has bag.
He saw the tv and want to his room to get has bag.
The police came. The police chased him.
The boy was in the forest
. The forest was dark.
The boy was in the forest
. The forest was dark.
The police caught the boy and asked the boy to sit down.
The boy curled into a ball and put his hands over his head.
The boy blew the police away with the light.
The boy curled into a ball and put his hands over his head.
The boy blew the police away with the light.
Thursday, August 8, 2019
Wednesday, August 7, 2019
Friday, July 26, 2019
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